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Today I joined to this community because I want improve my English. My name is Valy I'm studing this language since my school days. I'm seventeen.
In recent years more and more young women in Russia start smoking. When I see this I questioned myself aren't they understand -It's wery hurming for their health. According to statistic more than sixty persent of smoker in my contry women. Nobody tell them -stop, brake the circle of distraction!
Why everyone near them should smell this slow death? They kill the humanity, they annihilate the little pieces of oxygen we all have. Women and men, please, stop smoking.
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