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Relationships are an important part of life, despite of many times it is complicated to keep a stable relationship for many reasons. Mainly the problem more common it´s that flame of love disappears unexpectedly.
According to say, we are living in a sexist society, so the present situation in our country it´s too nasty.
But we also know that every time there are more women victims of to suffer sexual harassments, mistreatments on his couple´s or boyfriend´s side
However women do nothing for fear of reprisals between things another, despite of to be aware of the situation.
Therefore I think that it´s necessary to collaborate in this task in improving the situation.
Firstly should be given the information about genre violence in helping to visualize the phenomenon in all its complexity, because the mistreatment it’s at the same time, a crime and a social trouble.
Secondly we know that treat the genre violence it´s length and should be treated as a violation of the human rights.
Thirdly I consider that it´s not advisable encouraging directly the news about particular cases through the media. So the families of the victims have the order of to present the evidence in court.
Summing up, the killer deserves to be punished in the jail and he to spend the life sentence for a long time.
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According to say, we are living in a sexist society, so the present situation in our country it´s too nasty.
But we also know that every time there are more women victims of to suffer sexual harassments, mistreatments on his couple´s or boyfriend´s side
However women do nothing for fear of reprisals between things another, despite of to be aware of the situation.
Therefore I think that it´s necessary to collaborate in this task in improving the situation.
Firstly should be given the information about genre violence in helping to visualize the phenomenon in all its complexity, because the mistreatment it’s at the same time, a crime and a social trouble.
Secondly we know that treat the genre violence it´s length and should be treated as a violation of the human rights.
Thirdly I consider that it´s not advisable encouraging directly the news about particular cases through the media. So the families of the victims have the order of to present the evidence in court.
Summing up, the killer deserves to be punished in the jail and he to spend the life sentence for a long time.
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