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I majors in International Business at University of Economics HCMC, which contains comprehensive knowledge related to MNC (Multinational Company), like Lotte Group. I love doing business, so I sold many commodities by myself during studying at university, such as: flowers, fast-food, junk food,... on several special occasions to experience how hard real business is. Besides, I was a Marketing internship at Sakura cosmetics company and salesperson for Mobifone and online fashion store. During the time in university, I worked as a tutor for junior high school students. I taught them in Maths, Physical and Chemistry, it really meaningful to me. With all that things, I feel more confident and know clearly about myself.
Personality, strength and weakness:
"My personality is strong, sociable, creative and a bit crazy sometimes. I'm good at making plans, organizing and controlling to achieve given goals. Especially, I love creation in work and want to do breakthrough in my life. Maybe that things helped me became a leadership during studying at school, and want to be a manager in the future.
Besides strengths, I also have weakness, which is a little bit hot-tempered. I know this is not good for my work and my health, so I will try to control it. "
Motivation, Aspiration Career and Vision in Lotte.
I always desire to work for Multinational Corporations, and Lotte Group is definitely one of which. I want to become a member of Lotte and devote my competence to obtain your vision, so is mine: help Lotte become a top 10 of the biggest corporations in Asia at 2018. I apply for this position with strongly aspiration: to be a executive, bring the best things not only for your company but also for your customer, for my country. Knowledge can be additional, skills can be trained, but the passion and ideals which can not easily obtain. I assumed that I'm not the best candidate but completely the best choice for this position, for your company.
Language: English
Language Skills: Native speaker, Proficiency, Advanced
I majors in International Business at University of Economics HCMC, which contains comprehensive knowledge related to MNC (Multinational Company), like Lotte Group. I love doing business, so I sold many commodities by myself during studying at university, such as: flowers, fast-food, junk food,... on several special occasions to experience how hard real business is. Besides, I was a Marketing internship at Sakura cosmetics company and salesperson for Mobifone and online fashion store. During the time in university, I worked as a tutor for junior high school students. I taught them in Maths, Physical and Chemistry, it really meaningful to me. With all that things, I feel more confident and know clearly about myself.
Personality, strength and weakness:
"My personality is strong, sociable, creative and a bit crazy sometimes. I'm good at making plans, organizing and controlling to achieve given goals. Especially, I love creation in work and want to do breakthrough in my life. Maybe that things helped me became a leadership during studying at school, and want to be a manager in the future.
Besides strengths, I also have weakness, which is a little bit hot-tempered. I know this is not good for my work and my health, so I will try to control it. "
Motivation, Aspiration Career and Vision in Lotte.
I always desire to work for Multinational Corporations, and Lotte Group is definitely one of which. I want to become a member of Lotte and devote my competence to obtain your vision, so is mine: help Lotte become a top 10 of the biggest corporations in Asia at 2018. I apply for this position with strongly aspiration: to be a executive, bring the best things not only for your company but also for your customer, for my country. Knowledge can be additional, skills can be trained, but the passion and ideals which can not easily obtain. I assumed that I'm not the best candidate but completely the best choice for this position, for your company.
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