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Because, i dont feel like to study but i have 20 minutes to leave here. I sent him messages not less than 5. But he didn't answer at once. I started doubting my celphone has a defact in data communicat­ion. " SX telecome is the worst communicat­ion company. It has the highest fare and service is the worst. I'm going to change my communicat­ion company!! "
I muttered alone. I don't know how many times passed. Just I'm still wating..
but my phone is keeping quiet. bixxx Everything before i try, It looks i could do well. It seems like
my behinded talent. But most of things i tried, made not good result. Those were not my way. In this case, it is the turn of LOVE. but, like i used to, neither
i can't make it well. It seems like i failed. Because, It is always be me who say sorry when we make a conflict (but actually the most conflict caused by me. for example the lastest one. I lost my temper when i found he keep someone's picture like a plesure. when he was looking at that, i tried to see that. but he wanted keep it as a secret. so i tried to see that when he went to toilet -at that time we having picnict near the river- finally i could see that it was a woman's picture and i shocked of course. and i fell it... and then... wind brings it on the surface of the water. I was nonplused. He came and didnt hesitate to diving river -it seems like a scean of a movie. he was so cool! - dramatical­ly, he saved that. i was so sorry so i said like this.
"I'm so sorry, but you avoided it from me! " and then he was so angry. I dont think about the next step. Anyway it was only picture of his mother he has. )
and who always call first (Even if i dont call him, he never call me. i tried to stop calling him. and i couldnt hear him for 7days. ), when we meet i've always talk more, we've met always near his house (it takes 1hour by bus from my house)
sometimes i think im like a puppy. we kept our relationsh­ip in this way for a couple of months..
When i send him messages, he never answer by once. if i send him several times barely get a answer.
Like "Yes, i am working", " busy", "not today", "sorry"
... someting like that. These make me feel I'm getting lose in this thing call it love.
Anyhow, Today, he haven't sent me at once! It is unusual case. I'm getting worried about him. Was there any accident in his company?? anybody fired?? or does he go to emergency room? did he fell his celphone in toilet stool? I can't ignore that possibilit­y he put in his bag and forgot to working hard. right. like last time he punked our date. ...
then, i should send him more and make his phone ringing to he can hear and find it.
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