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Jimmy is a businessma­n. He is very tall, 2 metres, and he has brown hair. Some weird things of him that are he brushes his teeth 10 times a day and he must eat a bunch of bananas everyday. His hobby is collecting bullet from many sorts of guns. He has a twin brother, Tom, with the same appearance.
Tom also has some weird things. He always eats burnt toast with butter every morning and there must be bubbles in his bath.
So sometimes, people don’t recogize Jimmy when he and his brother are together at the same place. There are a lot of red rose bushes planted by himself in front of his house. His dog often buries its bone under these bushes.
In this morning, he went to work by bus. On the way to work, the roads were bursting with cars and he must spend 3 hours to get to his office. Hence, he was late for work.
In lunch, he was in private room to smoke. After finishing, he threw his leftover cigarette into the rubbish bin but the cigarette unfortunat­ely didn’t go into it and fell onto the floor. The cigarette burned a hole in the carpet. And he was fined 100$ for this.
In the afternoon, he had a meeting with his boss to discuss about the budget for new advertisin­g campaign. He burst into the room without knocking and burst the balloon prepared for his boss’ daughter birthday party. His boss asked him out imdediatel­y. After all, he had a nasty brush with his boss.
the days after, all the pressure built up and he was off work for days with stress.
What a bad day!
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