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As well as we are bare under our clothes, love is already our fundamenta­l reality veiled by the fears and the hopes of the ego. (Arnaud Desjardins)
So many days without a piece of news, without a call, without a word and she was still surpassing herself. She had won self-esteem. And all these things he brings to her, right now, in this emptiness, she remembered it & she kept it in her poket. Always by her side, never too far so it reassures her.
So many people asked her " but how can you stay? "! well I HAVE A HEART, I AM A FIRM, and I LOVE A BRILLIANT PERSON and I have a great deal of respect for him, he makes the things easy, even when these things seem the most complicate­d... Is there only a person who gets you feel this feeling!? he spares my feelings & I find it awesome.
She has spent an atypique year. Thanks to him, because of Others. She does feel independen­t toward The Others & she was willing to stay 'isolated', away from all those People. She felt free to act without taking into account heavy glances, gestures & remarks. They say that time changes things, but you actually have to change them yourself, to quote Andy. W. To have nothing to prove, (it belongs very also? ) = it's good too... at least, not to them.
" Wisdom, it is to have big enough dreams not to lose sight of them when we pursue them. "
Oscar. W
Her man has also taught her what it means to need truly s. o. But she never needed them at all. & she couldn't care less of what they think or talk about. Insocialbl­e, would you tell me about this girl eh? well, when s. o hardly inspires you, it is useless to be hypocritic­al and to walk alongside (=côtoyer) s. o just by fear of solitude.
Freedom, it is to be able to choose the person whose you shall be esclave.
Jeanne Moreau
She also knew it: she felt better than it! & to prove it, she tells them: "Speak about me for the better or badly, as long as you speak about me. "
This is Life. with those brilliant human beings & the other ones who never ask themselves questions, such coward the seem. But nonetheles­s, they do ask them to the others. The Pumpkin hadn't had her square among them & would have never it. Human's superficia­lity relationsh­ip, the hurting remarks whose you starve to escape, that was exactly what she by-passed. A load of people doesn't put friendly glances on her, even on their own friends: jealousy, poufiasse, blablabla....
The point: she had bloomed (=she had been thrilled), even in the sadness of the beginning.
And to be sure they won't give up each other, that he stays her up, it gives a taste to all those things which haven't any.
So while you're still asking me all those questions " how can you bla....? " Know that it's certainely not to you, indifferen­t beings of my life who will know... and you could obtain an answer only if you really knew me, without asking the question. (To begin, not to be superficia­l)
" speak about me for the better or badly, as long as you speak of me! "
" Evil is for love that the mystery is for intelligen­ce " (Simon. W)
And there were so many days she tried to force herself into believing this is what is life... unbearable people, bitches as everything, who try to have you understand that your desires are only a deception. Who knows? It might be true. But isn't it also what life is meant to teach you? take risks to discover it & to leave the superficia­l relationsh­ips & situations?
... even though it ended (btw them), would it mean she had made a mistake, you are allowed to delight in her misfortune. She would regret anything, not with Him. Anyway, it won't finish.
Walk on your own road, all the rest is distractio­n. (Gitta Mallasz )
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