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Angela Merkel is one of the most powerful woman in world. She became the President of Germany after a election in 2005.
Although she is a president, she still has a normal life like other people. She often has a crisp apple and a cup of milk for her breakfast. She always goes to bed at ten — she's a creature of habit. Her favourite book is 'No Cross, No Crown' by William Penn. She herself goes to glocery stores and buys stuffs on credit like a normal person. Sometimes, people even didn't recognized her.
After the Global Financial Crisis in 2008, Germany's ecomomy was very bad. There were many problems confrontin­g the Goverment such as increasing unemployme­nt, crime rise, etc. Angela was conscious about all the problems so she implemente­d many crucial solutions to help her country out of this crisis and create a powerful Germany. Farmers were given financial aids to achieve blumper crop. Angela requested to reform criminal law --by increasing punishment­s-- to reduce crime rate. She issued many policies to reconstruc­t the industry. Angela also wanted to broadcast the beautiful Germany's images and its culture. There were many German culture events happened in many countries around the world. Recently, in the European migrant crisis, Angela made a plan to strictly control immigratio­n. The plan has attracted criticism from Human rights activist. Immigratio­n criteria were criticized because it was too hard to meet. Some people thought that her decision was cruel but in my opinion, Angela only did nescessary things to assure that the crisis wouldn't become worse.
In brief, Angela is one of the best president in the world. She was a apparent evidence for the point that what men do, women can also do.
*Disclaimer: This is a made up story for educationa­l purpose only (No offense to anybody or any organizati­on). Informatio­n in this story is not assured to be true.
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