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Learning English
The Factors of Happiness
Generally speaking, there are many aspects affect whether one is happy or not. Property is one of the most important factors but it is not the decisive one. It is also related by relationship of friends, family, job etc.
Nowadays, a great many people feel that their rise in statue which depends on income in their opinion is well worth the loss of others. They believe that achievement equals their wealth. It is fact that the more you earn, the more you contribute to social. The man who is always raising money for poor people or disable is usually considered as a successful man. These well-paid people are often well-educated, and admired by others because of their experience of education and action, which let them feel comfortable and happiness.
It also can give rise to curious situations: in order to earn much, working hard day and night, ignore health, and, they get less time to contact their friends, even neglect feelings of their family. Though earning money is their aspiration, appropriately touch with relatives or fellow frequently is very necessary, special when you are annoy or enjoying with something for the simply reason that family is make up of one’s life. In my idea, family is priority, parents and wife or husband are the first, working is only just accessory, which makes our life better.
In a word, happiness depends on many factors. The harmony of family is at the top of Pyramid, working, income, businesses, and others consist of the base of Pyramid.
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