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Learning English
the lonely cloud
| Author: | sashka |
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she thinks she could never fall in love again, she looks in his eyes his love for him,and she knows that this is it, the real thing, and she falls in his arms, again and again, for the lonely cloud not to be so lonely Anymore.
She thought she could never fall in love again, she saw in his eyes his love for her,and she knew that this is it, the real thing, and she felt in his arms, again and again, for the lonely cloud not to be so lonely anymore.
Klementina
2009-09-18 13:47:20
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