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Learning English
In America!
Good day! I learn at the Voronezh state university. I finished the second course, and by these in summer I want to go in the USA according to the program Of work & Of travel.
I intend to be arranged to work in MacDonalds. In the free time me it would be desirable to look sights. I want to see statue freedom. To perceive the taste of free America, such as everyone it it presents. Still I would want to take a trip Las Vegas. But I fear, that money will not be sufficient. I study English from the first course. In the school they taught only German language to us. Many indicate that in America the language is differed from ancestor (England). It more easily and is not nagging to the grammar.
Now I shape documents. 2 additional friends will go with me. I hope that in me everything will come out.
I wrote this text in order to verify its knowledge of English. Find errors. Previously Artem
Hi! I'm a student at Voronezh State University. I've taken the second English course and by this summer I want to take advantage of the work and travel program. I intend to work at a McDonalds franchise. I want to sightsee and visit the Statue of Liberty. To experience the sense of freedom from the American perspective. I'd like to visit Vegas, but I'm afraid it'll cost too much. In school we were only taught German. I'm told, by many, that American English is easier to acquire than the English spoken in the United Kingdom. It's less dependent on grammar. At present I'm assembling my documentation. A couple of friends want to go with me. I'm hoping that everything will turn out successfully. I wrote this to demonstrate a command of English. Correct it ! (Please)....
pugwash123
 2010-02-02 09:47:56
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