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Learning English
SIMPLER (the song by me)
Seems to me, it's fine to be alive.
I am free, in love but sometimes
My feelings hurt me and I can't resist them.
I'm melting slowly and thinking that's my death.
* I wanna be simpler
To understand myself.
I wanna be sillier
Not to think: right or left?
I wanna be franker
To express my needs.
I wanna be happier
Not to be afraid of my tears!
Seems to me, it's nice to be alone.
I can believe, be pure but none
Needs my help and so my life is grey.
I'm doing a step and thinking that's my fate.
* Repeat.
(C) Ninnel
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