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Learning English

Israel attracts people

Author:lenusi4ok
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Corrector's skills: Native, Perfect
Tags: israel people
Language: English
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Israel attracts people for many reasons. For some, Israel - it is sun-soaked climate, for the other Israel - a rich diversity of interesting places and attractions - historical, archaeological, connected with religion, or simply beautiful. Even for someone of Israel - is a striking contrast between antiquity and modernity.

It is for everyone, but Israel holds a special hard to determine the quality - something related to another dimension, through which each visit to Israel, leaving an unforgettable impression. When you arrive in Israel for the first time, you will always cover the feeling of meeting with long-standing friends. Because so many names on road signs - Jerusalem, Sea of Galilee, Nazareth - known since childhood.

Also, you will feel inexpressible excitement of meeting with the history of Israel, passing by the places where the tread foot of Abraham 4000 years ago, King David - 3000 years ago, Christ - 2000 years ago, and credit stonostsev - 1000 years ago

Massada fortress is located on the top of the highland plateau in the eastern part of the Judean desert, on the western shore of the Dead Sea - the lowest point on earth. Mas'adah Geographical remoteness from the centers of civilization, as well as its natural fortification and isolation provided Fortress advantageous location in the Second Temple Period.

Masada was chosen king Irodov as a refuge from potential enemies, he built a good strengthening and magnificent palaces for himself and his entourage. In the large warehouse store abundant food supplies and weapons for 10 000 people.

Water bewitched his contemporaries and continues izmumlyat all, who today sees qanats and cut in the rock tanks, reservoirs and canals that provide a continuous flow of water upward.

Here, sheltering Jewish zeloty with their families in the 66 year n.e during the Great Uprising against the Romans. The last group of rebels, who built a synagogue, ritual pools and other public buildings, joined them after the destruction of the Temple in Jerusalem in 70 year.

After 3 years after the conquest of Jerusalem in 72 year, the Roman army attempted to seize the fortress, which then lived about a thousand people, including women and children (the remains of Roman camps and segdnya you can see from the mountains poyunozhiya). The siege of the fortress lasted 3 years. When the besieged in the fortress zeloty to realize that there is no hope for salvation, they have decided that we should die, and suicide.



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