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Malcolm X life in Englisch !!!!!! pls correct
This is a text about malcolm x I need it for my exam. My topic is Racism. pls correct !!
Malcolm little was born on May 19, 1925 in Omaha, Nebraska. He has eight children. When Malcolm was four years old his father was killed by a Ku-Klux Klan member. After that his mother got an emotional breakdown after the death of her husband and was committed to a mental institution. After that her children were split up in various foster homes and orphanages. He was good in the school but the school don’t interest him and he moved to Boston, Massachusetts to his sister and works various jobs. After some time he does some crime and was arrested for 10 years in the prison. He was three years early release from the prison. After a time his brother Reginald visit him and discuss with him about his Muslim religion. Reginald belonged to the religious organization the Nation of Islam (NOI). Fascinated of that, Malcolm began to study the teachings of the NOI and of the leader Elijah Muhammad. The NOI is a Sect of only Black People who believes to the Islam. But they see the white peoples as the devil. By the time he gets the X in his name, it is for the unknown origin, because little was the name of the slave-trader of his ancestors. Time to time Malcolm was very popular in the media. The NOI was very happy about that. But they don’t like that Malcolm was in the foreground and not the NOI Community. So they forbid Malcolm to speak to the media. Malcolm don’t do that and he escape of the NOI. He want understand the Islam better so he flew in the same year to Africa and Mecca. In his trip he understands that not all white people are so evil. Many white people have helped him and have eat with him. He has seen something that he has never see in America. He has chance his name from Malcolm to Hajj Malik el Shabazz and his religion views to the Islam. When he came from the trip back to America he gets many death threats from the NOI. On the 21 February 1965 a member of the NOI came to an event of Malcolm and shoot whit a gun in his heart so that Malcolm die fast. Even if he is dead, his speaking, theories and his engagement to the Islam were live up to today.
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