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Things I would never do.
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It`s a truth unversally acknowledged that the more you resist to something, that`t a sure -fire way that this is going to happen to you. So, being a supersticious person, I hope that`s not my case.
Many girls have been cherishing a sweet dream to marry someone they are deeply in love with, have a big beautiful wedding with an array of roses embellishing their big «Barbie-house» with a pristine old-fashioned white car that will take away a happy couple into the happy future. And when a girl bumps into hash reality her dreams shatter into tiny pieces, but she`s still haunted by the blurry image of her perfect wedding.
Hollywood movies set out to chisel a «fairy tale» dipict in girls` vulnerable minds, so it becomes difficult to get rid of it. That`s why many couples are splashing out to arrange a mindblowing wedding. In most cases it`s a mere desire to keep up appearances. Women excited about the fothcoming event plunge headlong into a spending spree in order to indulge their guests` whims and not their own.
If I were to marry I wouldn`t be too extravagant, that doesn`t mean I would penny-pinch on everything, it`s important to do everything within reasonable limits. Some have a guest list carried to an extreme, which means lots of little groups of people who hardly know each other. It`s your special day, that mustn`t be turned into a dull social event.
Another issue, I`d like to talk about is a certain type of women who are in quest for tycoons. The thing I would never do is marrying money. There are women how turn a blind eye, disregarding sentimental aspects, and marry someone who will provide them a better life. I can hardly imagine sharing my life with someone I`m not emotionally involved with. As if you were betraying yourself. There is hardly anything in the world that can make up for the lack of love, affection and mutual understanding. Money can`t buy you love.
Recently there has been a preoccupying tendency to marry the rich. So lots of businessmen have become a prime target for young rapacious ladies dreaming of the swiss account, cottage and diamond ring. All those tycoons are the fair game for most women who flock to them hoping to hit the jackpot. So feelings nowadays often seem bogus, something that is on the brink of extinction, like a rare breed.
The last thing I would never do is to kill anyone. It may seem drastic, but I could never figure out why people do it. Whatever reason you have, you can`t deprive a person of the most precious thing he has. That`s why war is something abnormal and abominable to me. I feel a deep aversion to governments which unleash wars causing hundreds of thousands of deaths of innocent people.
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