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Learning English
Essay - My job
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I have chosen to write an essay about my job, because I like my job and it is important to me. I spend a lot of time working, but feel that I have some sort of freedom when working. But with freedom comes responsibility.
My name is [Name] and I was born in [Year], I am therefore 16 years old. I have just finished the first 9 years of school, and have now started on [School name], which is an international business college. Here I go on a line called economy and math. Every second day after school I go to work. I work at a place called [Work place], which retail office supplies, furniture’s and printers. I started working there about 1 year ago, and it is actually my first job.
I work together with 4 other guys on my age, and we take every second day together 2 and 2. I am the one who has worked there for the longest, and usually the one, which all the others come to, when they have a question or a problem.
When I arrive, I have a procedure to go through. To begin with, when I get to work, I go out with all the cardboard that have been collected through the day. When I have emptied the box, is move on to the flammable garbage, and go out with that. When that is done, I make sure that there is not any cardboard or pallets lying around. When that is done, I go out and hang up my jacket.
Then I go out and start packing the orders which has been stacking up through the day. It is usually a bit stressing, because they keep bringing down new orders to pack. But on other occasions it can be kind of relaxing, to work there. When I am done with packing orders before 4:30 pm, which I am sometimes, I go out in the ware area, where I go around correcting the different goods. When there is nothing else to do, I get off.
I get about [amount] DKK, per hour I work, and every day when I come and leave, I sign in and out. Normally I get around [amount] – [amount] DKK a month, but I depends on whether there is a vacation and other various things.
I feel like I have a lot of responsibility at work, because I kind of lead 3 other guys, on the same age as me. So if I tell them something wrong, I will be the one to take the blame. So I get more freedom, but with freedom come responsibility.
I often get calls or texts from my colleagues and my boss, whether if I am capable of coming to work, but at most times, I have made plans for the day, and am not capable of helping out. It has become a bigger problem after I started at college, where we have a lot more homework to do than in elementary school.
I have considered either quitting my job and finding a new or to completely stop having a job, and concentrate on my school. I have chosen to keep the job until after Christmas, and take it from there.
But then again I must say. I am really happy about my job and, from what I know, it seems like it is one of the better jobs available on the market right now.
An essay written by [name]
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