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Learning English
Death- the future.
Everyone of us has thought about their future. It`s such a familiar way to escape from our reality when we`re in pensive mood. Blurry images build up in our minds carrying us far away into the future. Then, out of the blue, there`s death round the corner and we can`t help pondering over it. So if think about the future the inevitable question pops up: when does death come? And we`re all scared to death when it comes to death, aren`t we? Is there something to be scared of, or should we just abandon ourselves to the stream of life and stop questioning? There is no point in ruining our present for the sake of a hazy future. Still it`s a daunting challenge not to think about it if our mass-media doesn`t hesitate to transmit certain news. Even «death do us part», sacred words every couple exchanges, inevitably reminds us about a grim future. Among others, we all have heard of a flock of greedy relatives hovering over their senile uncle Tom who is about to make someone of his nearest and dearest inherit a great fortune. Evidently, someone`s death can be somobody`s prosperous future. Admittedly, life abounds with occasions where death is a part of everyday routine. Maybe we should try to think about it in other terms. We`ve all been taught from early childhood that good people go to heaven. So why don`t we imagine our future life in heaven, where chubby angels with soft candid wings give us a red-carpet treatment? Who knows, our life can be eternal. For example, ancient people believed that we didn`t die, that our soul left our body to pass into another one. This kind of theory can be pretty soothing for those who don`t mind being a butterfly in the next life. Anyway, we shouldn`t forget about the story which occured 2009 years ago. Jesus Christ bestowed his life to save mankind wallowed in sin, and he is still being worshipped. In this case, death saved the world and it`s future.
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