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У тебя есть фотки ?
Хорошо, жду фотки.
Я был там весной.
Мне было бы легче, если бы говорил по-немецки или по-английски.
Сейчас надо идти по городу с друзьями.
Вышли фотки, когда ты дома.
Не переживай, не даю их никому.
Ты должен изучать англиский лучше.
Каждый умный человек должен говорить по крайней мере на одном иностранном языке.
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Do you have any photos?
Ok, I am waiting for the photos.
I was there in the spring.
It would be easier for me, if you spoke German or English.
I have to go in the city with my friends now.
Send me photos, when you'll be home.
Don't worry, I will not give them to anyone.
You should learn English better.
Every intelligent person should speak at least one foreign language.
Логическая связь в этом тексте практически не прослеживается. Для телефонного разговора, конечно, нормально, но без ответных реплик выглядит не очень.
Dmitr
2010-09-21 05:45:04
@ Dmitr: There is no connection between the sentences. They are just some random questions/sentences used in a communication. What I wanted to know was if they are grammaticaly correct and if this is the way a Russian native speaker would express himself.
peterbald
 2010-09-22 10:25:20
Я сейчас пойду гулять (по городу) с друзьями. Или: мне нужно сейчас идти встречаться с друзьями.
Вышли мне фотографии, когда будешь дома.
Не волнуйся, я их никому не покажу.
Тебе стоит подучить английский.
Остальное вроде ничего.
fountainhead
 2010-10-26 12:40:35
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