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Just a few small parts of the text about videogames
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I love this game, maybe, it`s the best product of industry of the last five years. I don`t have a PS3 (yet%)), so I haven`t seen Heavy Rain, but Indigo Prophecy doesn`t seem to become worse in such company. A wonderful city-building strategy in which I vanished for a couple of weeks. No bugs, no slowdowns, even though they are usual for the games of this genre, haven`t been noticed. I hadn`t even to insert the disk, which was quite unusual in our time of total DRM-protection. With all that I had a great pleasure building a medieval city of my dream. I had very mixed emotions after finishing the game. It was just awesome if speaking about gameplay (all that physical dodges seemed to be ingenious and only them were the reason why did I play to the end), but, on the other hand, everything else was not so good. The story had nothing worth remembering, visuals were usual and the 6th chapter was so long, that I wanted to uninstall the game for a couple of times when playing it. Not bad, nothing more. DICE clealy wanted to beat Infinity Ward on their own field, but everything just a bit worse. However, this was just enough for B: BC2 to lose a chance of getting "the best game blockbuster" award. Perhaps, the best indie-platformer I have ever saw. Nobody had even thought that videogames can speak about such important and fundamental things just showing a man jumping on owls wiyj human faces.
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