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Learning English
I'm writting a fanfiction and I wan't to translate it in english!
Prologue: Everything has a beginning, no matter if it’s sorrowful or joyful.
That day, contrary to usually, I wasn’t alone with my sisters. My parents were returned from their travel to Crimea, where they had made new relationships : finally, they would be able to open their buisiness. My sisters were very happy to see them, but not me. For once that I wasn’t forced to take care of four little girls all alone, I prefered to rest. It was around midday, I was alone in my room, laying on my bed, doing nothing. And I found it very pleasant. I heard someone knocking on my door : it was my younger sister, Hana, in a few weeks she would be five.
‘You don’t stay with us, sis Ryoah ?’ she said, staring at me with her big child eyes.
‘No Hana, I want to rest.’
I was smilling at her. She couldn’t understand, but when she’d have children, she also will wait each second of rest like a divine blessing.
She moved forward and come to sit on my stomach.
‘Hana you’re crushing me.’
‘I want dad, mom and you to be together ! It’s so rare when everybody’s here !
She was still staring at me. She frowned, to look more serious. It was so cute that I almost laught, but I restrained myself, she would have taken it badly. I said to myself she was right, it was so rare that our whole family was gathered. I was about to stand up to go to the kitchen when I heard screams and growls coming from there. I signaled to Hana to be quiet, and stopped moving. I was listenning. I heard the sound of heavy footsteps, of hard breathing, of chewing. On the moment, I prefered not to think to what has happened to my parents and my little sisters, all I knew is that we were in danger.
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