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Does travel really broaden our mind?
Ⅰ. Why people interested in traveling?
Nowadays, people pay more attention to travel as an approach to relax them. When we start to think about travel, we must ask what we will obtain from travel. Why people interested in travel?
In my opinion, travel is not only to satisfy their visual, but also to broaden their mind for people. Of course, there are a great deal of people choose travel to relax themselves. Enjoying nature, not mention about pressures from work, family and other aspects .Also, during the hiking, climbing, it’s a good way to steel you. However, except these, traveling still can influence us on our thinking. There are a lot of people agree that after traveling people can have new ideas, especially through ancient culture, some architectures and some literatures.
Ⅱ. Does travel really broaden our mind？
A. People can’t adapt the environment quickly
On the contrary, in my opinion, traveling can not always broaden our mind. One of my friends went to France with bad reflection. Because he said he can’t suit the taste in France. But some days later, I heard from the people who traveled with him said he still ate English food in France. I was really surprised at that time. And this shows a problem that not all the people can feel comfortable after traveling. People can’t adapt the new environment quickly, because of different culture, different climate, and different language and so on.
And `jet-lag` and `culture shock` are the most obvious questions during traveling. The Robert Kohl’s had definite the culture shock in his book that when people go to a different culture to their original places, the vast majority of people will experience a mental confusion. Feeling loneness, no safety, can’t understand others. These phenomena’s are all called `culture shock` .But if we can’t come across the culture shock, the result will like the man above, have a terrible result.
And during the overseas travel, the airplane is the essential thing, that will cause a problem called `jet-lag`. The meaning is a tired and unpleasant feeling that you sometimes get when you travel by airplane to a place that is far away. I had an experience going to Europe; I must say that it was an uncomfortable time when I first landed, with a lot of things I couldn’t adapt to. Feel tired easily and you can’t enjoy the scenery because the same time on yesterday you are sleeping. However, `jet-lag`is easily to adapt, you should adjust it gradually.
B. The aim of the travels are different
Nowadays, not the aim of all the traveling is to broaden our mind. For government, the traveling means invests. Travelling is only a method to promote the development of economy, enhance the relationship between areas. Traveling always can bring some business chances and as a method to develop the international trade. For instance, the charities and the mediate aren’t concentrating on the traveling when they go to poor areas. Reality, they concentrate on the quality of the life there and what can be reported. However, they enjoy their traveling without any actions to broaden mind. Their life must better than there. The end result is that travel makes us feel more commercialization. However, if there is only common people can travel, there is not enough information.
Ⅲ.the disadvantage of traveling
No matter what problems we have, traveling also have a lot of benefits. But every coins have two sides, traveling can bring some disadvantages, like environment problem, culture problem, policy problem and religions problem.
Ⅳ.conclusion
Hence, I suggest that you take more consider before traveling. As a common person, if you only travel to enjoy yourselves, that should be a good choice.
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