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Learning English
Since you left me
I’m weeping, I’ve never cried !
Why do I feel it over ?
Our end
Tell me .. it is ?
I’m confused : thanks to you or because of you
I’m a new person now !
I don’t know how to fill this silence
The silence that you left
And that voice,voice of grief
Oh ! my life is turning into dust …
I’m fading
since you left
Your smile, now, tears me up
Because I know that I’ll never witness it beauty again …
When I remember how you used to hold me ,I cry
Because I know that I’ll never hold you close again …
The blame … yeah! it is on us
Our hearts are the guilty ones
Save your breath there is nothing to say
I’ll never forget you, who am I kidding ?
I loved you , I love you
No ! don’t enjoy it
Don’t enjoy my pain, my ache
It has been always pleasurable, now it is’nt
Now that we are done , I’m back on earth
Because with you I was always flying
There and here .. in the clouds, in dreams , formulating illusions!
But never on the real land , never with reality .
Don’t tell me, it’s because of the mistakes I’ve done ..
Because : Errors and mistakes makes you move forward
I’m fed up , of all those chalenges in life
It hearts .. too much !
I just feel like screaming out loud
I’m hanging by a slight of a hope brightness
I might find happiness again
You are going away , away from here, away from me
I’ll try but I’m not promissing anything
You’ll never be just a part of my past
I’m not promissing that I’ll forget you ,someday
But don’t worry ,
I forgive you … it’s not enough
It well never be .
Now, I’m hating my self for loving you.
Since you left me …
your smile will help my heart bruises to appear again
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